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a slab on a freezing metal tray.
a feast for eyes to see.
a more truthful perspective
of the purer parts of me.

everything that i possess
exposed to open space.
there's no brand of concealer
to hide this haunting face.

i give you all i have.
there's nothing that i hide.
now you can see the operative beauty
that i hold inside.

you can all be spectators to my
sorrow, joy, and rage;
am i not just a player
and all the world's a stage?
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inspired by 3rd hour biology :)
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Nice work.. last two lines, they gave me a chuckle. Good choice there, it was witty ;)

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thanks! honestly, i was basing the whole poem around those lines...:)

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